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Dream

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Was it all a dream?
That's what it feels like.
Just a hazy memory that's slowly fading.
But wait!
Those feelings....
They were amazing.
They made me so happy.
Made me feel whole,
And now we act as if nothing happened.
As if it had never occurred.
All the words I said were true.
Yet you act as though I lied to your face.
I wish I could just make you understand.
I wish you'd felt my pain,
As the dream came to an end.
I didn't want to it end like it did,
I begged it not to.
But still, it did,
And there's no going back to sleep.
No more lovely blissful feeling.
And i wonder what would've happened,
If I hadn't woken up.
Would I still be feeling at complete bliss,
Or would I be struggling to free myself
From a horrible nightmare?
Was it all a dream?
Yeah... This is how I feel right now. It's weird. I don't expect you to understand. LeeAnn might, but that's only because she gets me. lol.
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BeginningAgain's avatar
Lol. Yes, I do get it.
But you're right, it's confusing. And not just cuz it's a tough subject matter...your lines aren't clearing things up to your reader!
I'm going to quote one of my favorite critics on mibba here..."If your poem has a point it should specify it consistently. You shouldn't feel like you might have to explain things to your reader."
Just sayin' XD

Oh, and you're bordering on thoughts in lines on this one...there's barely enough rhythm to call it poetry.